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Post by Hammerstar on Jun 19, 2010 19:53:29 GMT -5
"Mosspaw, do you think we will get lost?" Rockpaw asked. "I hope you realize I can hear the shakiness in your voice, and I know we are NOT going to get lost." The young apprentice replied confidently. Just then Mosspaw heard a bush shaking behind him. He whipped around Just in time to see three warriors fling themselves out of there hiding spot. The gray-brown she-cat, using her insticts attacked closest one.
But before her attacks landed she found out it was Streamtail, Darkclaw, and Redfur testing them. "Rockpaw? Where are you?" Mosspaw called. Then she spotted his gray pelt leaning against a huge boulder. After the patrol returned Darkclaw, went to his close friend Hammerstar's den and told him about the small adventure. "Rockpaw was scared but his camouflage against the rock did well. Also, think Mosspaw will make a fine warrior. I hope you will train her well Darkclaw." Hammerstar said. "She shouldn't be too much trouble." Darkclaw responded calmly.
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Post by Fallowing on Jun 20, 2010 0:24:49 GMT -5
[ Good roleplay. I have a little constructive criticism for you here. You should paragraph it, as in everytime a cat speaks, hit the enter key twice then put what they say. It will help organize your roleplay. But other then that, it is good. =3 +Karma! ]
A small gray and white apprentice sat on the branches above them, unseen to the cats. They were new, she didn't recognize these odd cats, ones that smelled fishy and foreign. Twinpaw's eyes sparkled as she stalked them from above as they moved. As she hopped from branch to branch, she lost her balance and jumped onto a thinner one, which ultimately swayed and knocked her hind paws off of the branch.
Scrabbling back up, she hoped she hadn't made too much noise and alerted the strangers to her surroundings. Letting out a sigh, she hopped back a few branches to observe.
[Twinpaw is a new apprentice, one who snuck out while fetching moss, and accidentily crossed the borderline without knowing.]
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Post by Hammerstar on Jun 24, 2010 15:03:51 GMT -5
Later as the moon high patrol walked toward the SkyClan border they picked up a fresh scent.
"SkyClan! They're scent is here! On OUR territory!" Darkclaw said to Redfur
"I'll tell Hammerstar about it when we get back. He might even mention it at the next gathering!" Redfur replied.
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Post by Fallowing on Jun 24, 2010 22:46:03 GMT -5
Twinpaw froze in place. She had been tracking them through the trees almost their whole patrol. She was surprised nobody was looking for her. Her eyes grew wide at the thought of crossing the border. She didn't do that... did she? Getting nautious, she swayed side to side, toppling backwards.
Mewing, she scrabbled trying to dig her paws into the branch correctly, but her chance of recovering was gone. Falling, she landed on her four paws and hissed at the patrol, slowly backing away. She was absolutely terrified, after finding out they were from a different Clan.
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Post by Hammerstar on Jun 25, 2010 6:16:46 GMT -5
THUMP!
"What was that?" Streamtail asked. "I smell an even stronger scent of SkyClan here." The patrol whipped around to find one of the enemy Clan's apprentice following them!
"Well, well, well. What do we have here? We don't want to hurt the poor little scrap. Let's let her go home and just tell Hammerstar." Darkclaw said to the rest of the patrol.
"We'll escort her to the border since she doesn't know her own territory very well." Streamtail replied to the idea."
After the young cat went across the border out of earshot of their conversation. Redfur meowed " Lets go in for the night."
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Post by Fallowing on Jun 27, 2010 13:12:39 GMT -5
Twinpaw's blue eyes grew wide, showing her fear. What was she going to tell Tanstar? Or her mentor, Jumpingstorm? This was her worst nightmare. The scent of RiverClan was thick in her nose.
Twinpaw backed into a tree. Whirling around, she clawed it viciously. It was a sight to see. "I am not a small scrap! I am going to be a warrior! Stop treating me like I'm invisible!" She hissed, secretly pleased she wasn't going to be hurt.
She gave her chest a few embarassed licks. She was resilient, and loved a challenge.
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Post by Moonpaw on Feb 13, 2011 17:31:45 GMT -5
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